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25 Oct 2009 — Hula hoop

 

How would you improve this sentence? 

Michelle Obama demonstrating her hula hooping skills on the White House lawn.

Michelle Obama demonstrating her hula hooping skills on the White House lawn.

 

Select one or more options and read the feedback.

 

1.

 

Michelle Obama was demonstrating her hula hooping skills on the White House lawn.

2.

Michelle Obama, [who was] demonstrating her hula hooping skills, promoted healthy activities on the White House lawn.

3.

Michelle Obama, [who was] demonstrating her hula hooping skills on the White House lawn, promoted healthy activities.