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22 Nov 2008 — Parallel

How would you improve this sentence?

We stood in a long line waiting, talking and discussed how to fix this this country.

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Change discussed to discussing.

We stood in a long line waiting, talking and discussing how to fix this country.

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Change the waiting, talking to waited, talked.

We stood in a long line waited, talked and discussed how to fix this country.

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