Pop Question

11 May 2008 — Balloons

How would you improve this sentence?

The runner who his balloons popped ran to the finish line naked.

Select one or more options and read the feedback.

Change who his balloons popped to that his balloons popped.

The runner that his balloons popped ran to the finish line naked.

Feedback 1

Change who his balloons popped to his balloons popped.

The runner his balloons popped ran to the finish line naked.

Feedback 2

Change who his balloons popped to whose balloons popped.

The runner whose balloons popped ran to the finish line naked.

Feedback 3

pop (V) – to break, burst or explode

race (n. or v.) – running competition

naked (V) – undressed, without clothing or cover