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A deranged man mowed down a crowd of people with a truck watching fireworks.
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Move with a truck to the end of the sentence.
A deranged man mowed down a crowd of people watching fireworks with a truck.
Move with a truck after mowed down.
A deranged man mowed down with a truck a crowd of people watching fireworks.
Move with a truck after man.
A deranged man with a truck mowed down a crowd of people watching fireworks.
deranged (Participial Adjective)—insane, crazy, dangerous, mentally ill
fireworks (N)—a pyrotechnic display.
mow down (V transitive)–cut down grass or grain with a machine
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Misrelated Clauses (Misplaced Modifiers) | By / With (instrument)
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