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5 Oct 2014 — Comma and

 

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Comfortable walking shoes

Commuters wear comfortable, lightweight shoes and stick to flats.

 

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Commuters wear comfortable, lightweight shoes and stick to flats.

2.

Commuters wear comfortable, lightweight and flat shoes.

3.

Commuters wear comfortable, lightweight shoes, and women stick to flats.

 

flats (n.) — shoes without heel height

stick to (v.p.) — prefer

The Oxford Comma — Comma before "and"