Pop Question

2 Mar 2014 — Coordinating Participle Modifiers

 

How would you improve this sentence?

director

Martin Scorsese is both talented and eager to direct movie thrillers.

 

Select one or more options to read the feedback.

 

1.

excited about directing.

Martin Scorsese is both talented at and excited about directing thrillers.

2.

Martin Scorsese is both talented at and accomplished in making thrillers.

3.

Omit at after talented

Martin Scorsese is both talented at and accomplished in making thrillers.

 

accomplished (participial mmodifier.) – skilled, learned

complement (v.) – completes

thriller (n.) – an exciting, suspenseful story, play or movie