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25 Oct 2009 — Hulahoop

 How would you correct this sentence?Michelle Obama demonstrating her hula hooping skills on the White House lawn.

 

 

 

 

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2. Change demonstrating her hula hooping skills to a modifying clause.

       Michelle Obama, [who was] demonstrating her hula hooping skills, promoted healthy activities on the White House lawn .
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Solution - lightbulb    Reducing Clauses to Modifying Clauses  |  Using Commas - modifying clauses
 

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