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31 Aug 2008 — Alcatraz

 

How would you improve this sentence? 

Alcatraz Island surrounding by fog was a depressing place to serve time in prison.

Alcatraz Island surrounding by fog was a depressing place to serve time in prison.

 

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Alcatraz Island surrounded by fog was a depressing place to serve time in prison.

2.

Alcatraz Island was a depressing place to serve time in prison surrounded by fog.

3.

Alcatraz Island, surrounded by fog, was a depressing place to serve time in prison.

 

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